We are learning to write a funny made up story. we will also use speech marks,question marks and exclamation marks.
One day a laughing wolf and his friend pig had a play date .The pig said to the to "should we have a disco party?'', the wolf said ''yes''.Then the wolf said " what food should we have at the disco party?"The pig said" lollies ,popcorn ,jelly ,chips and cake"shouted the pig! In two days time at 8:00 pm. Once the disco party started the pig said" can we turn up the music? " The wolf said " yes ".
reflection-
2 stares I like it because you can make up your ideas.I also like it because you have to add punctuation.
1 wish I wish we could chose what animal we wanted to write about.
Question-have you write about a laughing wolf?
Hi Brody, you have done a great job at adding in your punctuation, especially the speech marks. This made me think about the school disco we went to. Great writing.
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