meeting Trano

WALT- WOW words make our work more interesting for the reader.
We had to write a story using a picture and we had to add WOW words to our story.

Once upon a time I saw an enormous dinosaur I called him Trano. After a while he always followed me. I turned him into my pet. Trano loved fetching stuff and digging holes and burying bones. One day we went to the beach we played fetch with a enormous tennis ball.Then Trano went for a swim in the ocean Trano loves slashing.
When Trano was slashing he wet me we both laughed. Then we went home.

Reflection-
2 stares I liked it because we got to chose our sentence starters. I also like it because we could chose what ideas we wanted use in our story.
1 wish we could share our ideas.
Question- Have you write about a dinosaur?

the laughing wolf

WALT-we are learning to proofread our story's so they make sense to the reader.
We are learning to write a funny  made up story. we will also use speech marks,question marks and exclamation marks.

One day a laughing wolf and his friend pig had a play date .The pig said to the to "should we have a disco party?'', the wolf said ''yes''.Then the wolf said " what food should we have at the disco party?"The pig said" lollies ,popcorn ,jelly ,chips and cake"shouted the pig! In two days time at 8:00 pm. Once the disco party started the pig said" can we turn up the music? " The wolf said " yes ".

reflection-
2 stares I like it because you can make up your ideas.I also like it because you have to add punctuation.
1 wish I wish we could chose what animal we wanted to write about.

Question-have you write about a laughing wolf?

Mihi

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