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Wednesday, 25 September 2019

meeting Trano

WALT- WOW words make our work more interesting for the reader.
We had to write a story using a picture and we had to add WOW words to our story.


Once upon a time I saw an enormous dinosaur I called him Trano. After a while he always followed me. I turned him into my pet. Trano loved fetching stuff and digging holes and burying bones. One day we went to the beach we played fetch with a enormous tennis ball.Then Trano went for a swim in the ocean Trano loves slashing.
When Trano was slashing he wet me we both laughed. Then we went home.

Reflection-
2 stares I liked it because we got to chose our sentence starters. I also like it because we could chose what ideas we wanted use in our story.
1 wish we could share our ideas.
Question- Have you write about a dinosaur?

1 comment:

  1. Hi Brody, I really like the wow words you have added to your writing. I love reading your imaginative stories. I have never written a story about a dinosaur before, maybe I should try!

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