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Wednesday, 8 April 2020

fishing

WALT-WE are learning to write stories on our device using google Docs.

What I learnt- I learnt how to use google docs for writing stories.


                                                    Title - fishing
On Friday,  me and my Dad went fishing  at tokerau beach.
 When we got there we put out the longline, well my dad baited
the hocks, I chased the seagulls   away ,so the seagulls didn't take the bait.
 when the longline was out at sea me and my dad played
rugby for fifteen minutes.
 Then we had feijoas and 
crackers. 
After that we  made sandcastles for eighteen  minutes.
Then we played some more rugby again for about fifteen minutes.
Then we had more crackers and feijoas.
Finally it was  time to pull the longline in,The first five hocks had no fish,
then on the eighth  hock we finally had a fish, when the long line was pulled in
we caught six
fish and put one back because it was too small.
Then we went home.
THE END

BY BRODY

Reflection-
2 stars- I like using google docs because you can change the font.
I also like it because you can highlight the background of the words.
1 wish - I wish you could change the background.
Question- have you used google docs to type a story before?




2 comments:

  1. I really like how you added detail about what happened into your writing. I am glad you caught some fish.

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  2. YUM! Bet you had an awesome dinner that night! What kind of fish were they?

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